Below is our second edit of our music video. We took into consideration all the feedback which we received from the first edit of our final music video and made a second edit with all the improvements.
Below is a link for our second draft of our music video.
KGB Productions- Second edit of New York Ciry
We then received feedback from our focus group regarding any negatives which could be improved upon.
Focus Group Feedback:
Phoebe: "I think the girls have made this video look really cool and it is getting better and better! The corrections which were needed after the first draft have been made, there is some refining to go but the concept is definitely there."
James: "The quality of the second draft is a lot higher than the first. I really like the transitions used and the reversed sequences. I like the fact they've gone off path from their plans in order to avoid continuity issues as I think is shows how versatile they are as a group."
Alex: "This is still completely different to the storyboard but it works. The girls have obviously worked hard and spent time on fixing the issues and I like that they keep putting new ideas in there. I think it is almost at completion but will look even better with refinement."
Scarlett: "It was a promising first draft and an even better second draft. The audio goes with the visuals and you can see that links are being made. I am really glad the jumpy cuts have been fixed and the music video is more visually enjoyable now."
Ben: "I really love the emotions Phoebe is portraying in the music video and it goes really well with the song. The whole concept works really well and I really look forward to seeing how the final product turns out."
Reflection
After receiving this feedback from our focus group we took into consideration all of the negatives which could be improved on. It is important to take into count all the negatives which other people not just us pick up on and can say about our music video.
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