Final Edit - Ancillary tasks- Magazine Advertisement

Below is our final edit of the magazine advertisement. After making a few adjustments to the other edit which we made we decided that we want the 'Out Now' to be on the side of the poster and the name of the song 'New York City' more towards the top of the page so that it stands out more and is effective for the viewers.

Final Draft- Feedback

Focus Group :

Phoebe: "The finished product looks really good and like it would fit into a magazine. All the features incorporated work and are in sync with traditional conventions of promotional posters."

James: "The text is clear and the colours are really cool. I like the reflectiveness of the expressions and it fits with the music video. The brand is recognisable as there is a connection between the products. The use of the logos is really good as it shows it to be in professional setting.

Alex: "This is a cool poster and I like that the writing is clear and in a large font. It fits the conventional features of a promotional poster. It looks better now that the sizing is correct."

Scarlett: "I think the poster picture and the picture on the album cover work well together as they're obviously at the same location. There is a clear link between the products which is good for the audience and the artist as the brand is recognisable."

Ben: "It's really important to make a link between the products for the audience and the girls have achieved this really well. I like that all the logos are incorporated and the text is clear which is also important. It all works really well, even better now it's the same size.

Teacher Feedback :Mr Kerrigan

 The images you have used are very effective. There is something striking about the difference between the image used for the body of your magazine poster and the image used for your digipak; I like the contrast between your performer facing away from the camera in one image and being side-on in the other. There is a clear sense of interconnectivity between your three products.

Personal evaluation:

In having received the feedback above it was very useful as we were then able to know how effective we were in creating this product. It was interesting to ask how well both the digipak and magazine promotional poster work together and what other people think of them working together.